My Little Girl ©

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My Little Girl ©
You'll always be 'My Little Girl'
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does she ever have the moon on her pyjamas

No, she had the stars. Your turn will come ! Thanks Karlos

DSS

[this is good]
Good Work . This is somewhat Stevie Wonderish. I mean as a compliment.
I have a song about about my son called ' Finn the Rascal' It is on my profile.
cheers
love the acoustic sound great song

i have two daughters myself and its hard watching them grow up into young women,wish they could stay little girls forever, great catchy tune here

lisa x

Seems to have caught listeners heart-strings. Sentimental lot. Thanks.

DSS

So when it comes to your daughters wedding - rather than a speech - perhaps perform this song?????? Really good song and arrangement. Could the vocal tracks be a little more prominant though? Just needs to cut through more.

If should write a song for my son and call it "Little monster"

Lee

Agreed, vocal should be more prominent. The trouble with songwriters, they bury their own voices. Would love a great singer to record it as it would be a good song for a wedding, but not to replace the speech of course ! Thanks

DSS

how could we replace the speech they're the best things at weddings lol, there are loads of fantastic singers on vox that im sure would love to cover this track, get in touch with them. im sure they won't bite lol

good luck with it

lisa x

love the song its really gd well done!! check out my new one

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